2017年8月3日雅思写作考试真题范文

Students in university should be specialized in one subject rather than to develop a wider range of many different subjects.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.



文章分析:
本文是一篇教育类的大作文,讨论大学生是应该专注去学一个科目还是广泛接触各种科目,该话题的论证从广泛学习各类学科和专注个别学科的各自优缺点展开。首先表明自己观点后进行双方讨论,结尾段再强调观点进行总结。
首段:提出观点,支持广泛学习各学科
主体段1:论述了为什么要专注学一个科目:人类已经步入了一个非常专业化的时代,大家各司其职。只有大学里努力学好核心的学科,才能在将来成为专业人才。并且大学里的时间也是非常有限的,不把时间放在一个学科上,很难学得好。文中接下来用到了举例论证,医学专业,如果学生不专注学好他们自己的核心科目,那么他们将来很难成为专业的外科医生或内科医生(注意这里分的比较细,也是为了突出要把那一个科目学好,将来更有可能成为专业化的人才)。
主体段2:转折,论述为什么要广泛接触各种学科。第一个原因,在真实的职场中,情况是非常复杂的,并不是学好了自己的专业知识就能应对各种挑战,举例论证。接下来还提到了另一个原因,学各种学科不仅可以应对挑战,还能在此基础上有所发展,因为广泛接触各种学科可以让学生有更多的想法,并且对事情有更全面的看法,可以促进创新。
结尾段:用让步状语从句总结全文,尽管专注去学一个学科对于成为专业化人才很有帮助,但是从长远发展来看,在大学时期多接触不同科目更有益。
参考范文:
Nowadays, people are cynical about whether students should major in one subject or learn a variety of subjects when they are in university. From my point of view, I support the latter opinion.
On the one hand, students focusing one subject are more likely to take up decent jobs in the future. As we all know, human beings have already entered the era of specialization. And only with the knowledge of core subject that students learn in the university, can they become professionals afterwards. A fact making the situation even urgent is that the time in university is so limited that if they do not concentrate on one discipline, they may not gain a deeper understanding of this discipline. Taking medical science for an example, there is little possibility for students to become prestigious surgeons or physicians if they do not devote themselves to their core subject.
On the other hand, the situation in the workplace is far more complex and only concentrating on one subject is not sufficient for students to respond to the challenges when they enter the workplace. For example, almost in every industry, graduates have to communicate with colleagues and in this sense, if they learn behavioral psychology in university, they may understand their colleagues more and know how to work collaboratively with others to achieve shared targets. Apart from this, developing a wider range of subjects exposes students to many more new ideas and makes them acquire a multidimensional understanding of current issues, which will definitely promote innovation in their future career.
In conclusion, while sparing on effort to study on discipline can make students become professionals in the future, exposing a variety of subjects is more beneficial for them in the long term.
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