高考大幕终于慢慢落下，今年除了考试的各位莘莘学子，送考的各位家长们也吸引了各大媒体的目光，一则“各地送考妈妈穿旗袍 寓意旗开得胜”的新闻迅速登上热搜榜，真的是不得不服气，我们的父母总愿意奉献无私，可谓竭尽所及，倾其一生。其实这也和我们今天所讲的作文Topic有那么一点点关联，那么，就直接来看看吧～
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话不多说上真题~Is it usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree?如果考试遇到这道题，请问你会怎么破？
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以下是某位大神满分作文参考：Nowadays, whether getting married prior to the completion of education and securing a well-paid job is prudent has been an intensely debatable controversy. I personally believe that doing so would lead to more worrying disadvantages than its advantages.Admittedly, the love and care from family can be a driving force towards one’s academic fulfillment. To be more specific, it is the family’s warmth and support that considerably help people to get through hard times, especially when it comes to sickness and mental issues, such as anxiety and distress in the time of huge academic workload or final exams. For example, extensive scientific researches have shown that those who are wedded or even in a stable relationship are statistically more likely to overcome obstacles they face in their life than their unattached counterparts.However, the downside of having a marriage before graduation and starting a career could by no means be overlooked. With heavy family responsibilities, it is generally more challenging to achieve full academic potential. That is to say, those wedded college students are often torn between the needs of caring for their spouse, rearing children and academic pursuit, let alone being the bread winner. As a consequence, they might find daunting difficulties in striking a balance with study and family, and failing some modules, or even inability to graduate could ensue, which is indisputably a waste of both time and money.In conclusion, despite the support that family members bring, in my opinion, it evidently does more harm than good to tie the knot without educational qualification and a stable source of income.(263 words)Written by: Dean Zhang解析：Step 1 审题并抓关键词，foolish, get married, before, studies, jobStep 2 思考论点正方：家人的关爱帮我们度过难关，特别是生病，以及在学业繁重或期末开始复习的时候。反方：由于家庭责任重大（照顾配偶，养育子女），很可能无法做到学习和家庭的平衡，从而无法完成学业，浪费时间与金钱。首段：写法很简洁，直接paraphrase题干，并摆明自己的立场。可用经典句：1. Whether XXXXX has been an intensely debatable controversy.2. I personally believe that doing so would lead to more worrying disadvantages than its advantages
主体段1：admittedly让步开头，引出自己的观点：the love and care from family can be a driving force towards one's academic fulfillment. （家人的关爱帮我们度过难关）。然后用到To be more specific这个词组，衔接接下来展开解释部分To be more specific, it is the family’s warmth and support that considerably help people to get through hard times, especially when it comes to sickness and mental issues, such as anxiety and distress in the time of huge academic workload or final exams.最后For example，引证补充说明，支撑论点。主题段2：However转折开头，开始讨论弊端。在一句套路话之后，摆出自己的论点：点With heavy family responsibilities, it is generally more challenging to achieve full academic potential. 然后用That is to say 这个词组衔接接下来展开解释部分。最后As a consequence，以讨论导致的结果来补充说明。结尾段：将主体段观点简短地概括。可用经典句式：In conclusion, despite the support thatXXXXX, in my opinion, it evidently does more harm than good to tie the knot without XXXXX. |
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