雅思写作的评分标准分别是：TR，CC，GRA 和LR四项，其评分标准之细和具体，从某种程度上更侧重于对英语语言基本功的考查。 怎么做到句式多样化——
一、连接词的使用
假如作文里有大量简单句的出现，不用说，句式必定是非常单调的；而正确使用连接词不光光能合并简单句，更能让文章的内容，观点更清晰地表达出来。一般来说，大家可以从四组连接词入手，表达不同的逻辑关系。
表示并列关系（增补）：and, as well as, besides, furthermore, moreover, not only…but also等；
表示转折关系：however, in spite, though, but, otherwise, whereas, nonetheless等；
表示因果关系：since, as, so, because, why等；
表示时间顺序：before, after, since, as, until, meanwhile, when, whenever, as soon as等。
当然，复合句的使用也是必不可少的，表示从属关系的连接词有，who, what, that, which等等。
举个例子：
He was born in a small village. His father was a teacher in the village school. His mother did housework. He began to go to his father's school at seven. He graduated from it six years later. He went to the junior middle school in a nearby town. He studied at a senior middle school in the county. He was a good student there.
虽说以上所有句子都正确的，但是句型非常单一，八个句子中除了两个主语--“His father”和“His mother”外，其他句子都是以“He”开头的。
修改一下，则会好得多：
He was born in a small village. His father taught at the village school and his mother did housework. He began to study at his father's school at seven and six years later entered the junior middle school in a nearby town.After graduating, he was admitted to a senior middle school in the county, where he proved to be a good student.
二、短语的使用
简练是写作取得高分的一个非常重要的标准，过于拖沓的语言难免让人觉得写作人语言功力不够，底子薄弱。假如学生能根据前后句子之间的关系，使用分词短语、不定式短语、介词短语或形容词短语将从句简化，不仅能丰富句式，还可以用相对较少的词汇表达相同的信息。
例如：
1. If he had been born in the new society, he would have developed into a great artist.
2. She was so weak that she couldn't even stand up.
3. She was frightened when she saw a lion staring at her.
4. As she was not satisfied with this, she tried to think of a better solution.
修改后：
1. Born in the new society, he would have developed into a great artist.
2. She was too weak to stand up.
3. She was frightened at the sight of a lion staring at her.
4.Not satisfied with this, she tried to think of a better solution.
三、长短句交替使用
长句因为使用了较多的限定语，比较精确，但使用起来不灵活，而且比较拖沓。短句直截了当，一般比较简洁，但不适用于复杂信息的表达。因此，在写作中很重要的一点就是长短句的交替使用。
例如：
I like reading novels. They often tell me interesting and moving stories. Some stories are also instructive. They describe good and evil people. They describe the bright side and the dark side of life. They help me distinguish between right and wrong. In this way they have helped me understand people and life. As a result, I seem to have become wiser.
此段中一共有八个简单句，句型结构单一，十分单调。
我们可以这样修改：
I like reading novels becausethey tell interesting and moving stories. Moreover, some stories are instructive. By describing good and evil people，and the bright side and the dark side of life, suchstories help me to distinguish between right and wrong, and understand people and life. Reading them has perhaps made me wiser.
很明显。修改后，段落的中心意思更加明确。长句点出了作者为什么喜欢读小说，短句则有力地表达了作者的感受。
四、巧用倒装结构
例如：
1. Under no circumstances should we do anything that will benefit ourselves but at the same time harm the interests of others.
2.In herhe has absolute faith.
3. By no means should we look down upon people who have less education than we do.
当然，倒装句一般而言会比较难掌握，同学们使用的时候，一定要弄清楚各个语法点，假如语法用错了，那可就得不偿失了。 |
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