Retell Lecture可谓是PTE口语部分的难题了,很多同学都表示就感觉自己的口语栽在这个题型上。
?这道题乍一听是有一些乱的,很难抓住其中的重点,具体如何抓住Retell Lecture的关键信息以及Retell Lecture具体的评分标准,大家可以复习一下这篇文章:我们接下来就来整理一下这篇文章的关键信息:Topic: Make the future better than pastKey Points:
- The millennium development goals achieved extrodinary progress - Children survival rate is up - The incidence of poverty and malnutrition is down- Robust economic growth in Africa countriesConclusion: Africa's making progress but it's not the whole story.
?学员高分答案:The lecture talks about the belief in making the world a better place in the future. Firstly the lecturer mentioned that the millennium plan established by UN, that enabled Africa countries to make a good progress. Moreover, she mentioned the children survival rate as the basic indicator of whether a country is successful. And it has improved greatly in Africa. Lastly she talked about the robust economic growth in African countries. In conclusion, the world has improved a lot and Africa is just part of it.
总结下来这位同学的答案的优点在于:- 结构完整,思路清晰,关键词明确,方便评分系统识别;- 包含了大部分的关键点,内容分可以拿到高分4分;- 没有出现抠细节的情况,点赞表扬;- 发音标准,语调起伏有致,Pronunciation可以拿到满分5分;- 虽有失误,但立即克服,保证了整体的流畅,Fluency也可以拿到4分。
当然她的答案也有所欠缺:- 缺失了poverty and malnutrition的相关内容,否则内容分也可以拿到满分5分;- Conclusion理解和Lecture实际内容有出入,对Lecture的内容把握还需要提升;不过这个不太重要,只要能在答案中提到Conclusion(underlying development等)并且内容不是太过离谱,系统都很难判定是否观点错误;简而言之:有,就行。 |