我7月4日就要考了，因为2月份考过一次，lisening 7, reading 7.5, speaking 8, 就是writing只得了5.5,气愤啊～～ 所以决定再考一次，自己在家复习，reading, listening都有答案可以校对，就是writing没有一个标准，所以希望大虾们帮帮忙，修改一下我的作文，狠批一下也没关系～～ 谢谢你们的帮忙!
The line graph demonstrates the need forelectricity in England on daily basis in both seasons: winter and summer, whilethe pie chart illustrates the detailed proportion that electricity is used ineach English household.
It can be seen from the first graph thatthe needs for electricity fluctuates through the whole day. Specifically, inwinter day, the figure stands at 39000 units, followed by a drop in the next 3hours, to 31000. Similarly, in summer time, at 9:00 o’clock, the figureexperienced a collapse, by steady, from 18000 to 13000 units. Both figuresshoot up at its peak around 13:00 o’clock, 40000 units in winter, and 20000 insummer. Then in winter time, the figure levels off at 40000 till midnight, thengoes back to 35000; whereas, the figure in summer was in the decline since15:00pm except a tiny increase around 22:00pm.
The pie chart renders a more specific illustrationon the electricity use. To be exact, electricity used in heating rooms, heatingwater is made up for 52.5%, 17.5% of the electricity is used for ovens,kettles, washing machines; equally 15% of electricity is respectively consumedfor lighting, TV, radio and vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools.
In sum, the demand for electricity inWinter overweighs in Summer.
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