谁要Hugo改作文的，请到这里

Requirements:
1. Post your work here.
2. Reduce your work into only 3 paragraphs.
3. Write your work logically, I am only responsible for correcting your grammar not making your work less stupid. If your work is written in an illogical way, please ask your Chinese teacher for help. I will not waste my time in correcting your grammar, cause your work is still illogically stupid after my correction of your grammar.
[ 本帖最后由 hugo800 于 2009-10-22 20:38 编辑 ]